I have gotten feed back of the paper you helped me write last week. The professor provided me with notes to make the paper better.
I will attach a copy of the professor’s thoughts in addition of a pdf of the paper I submitted.
some of the notes included:
1. I need a more actual Science. Go in depth about the science of the book and what concepts you learned from the book. In addition to new information you never knew before.
2. I would like the personal reflection to be more personal. How does this book change the way you look at the universe?
This paper is really important Please work on fixing and revising it and go in depth.