So the requirement of this essay is that “you are arguing for the addition or removal of one core required class for your major. Additionally, please keep in mind that your argument needs to consider the needs for the majority of students in your major. Put another way, you are not making an argument solely about what how adding a required class or removing one would make the major better for just you. You are making an argument for the majority of students in your major.”
Now, please revise essay and consider using the peer feedback, to ensure you have made a compelling argument that follows the assignment. Allow yourself time to review your transitions between paragraphs, the title and structure of your essay, and other aspects of your essay.