In this final deliverable, students will demonstrate an understanding of the problem and fully develop all required elements of the memorandum for this writing assignment. Refer back to the reading part of this assignment to find the formatting of the memorandum, the elements required, and the content to be included. Review and revise your pre-writing document using the input from your classmate to assist your own revision process. Be sure to edit the document for grammar and spelling prior to turning it in. For convenient reference, the assignment is included below.found in the
Step 1: Review Peer Review Feedback and Integrate Your RevisionsWriting Assignment 2 Reading #GEA 2
Give careful consideration to all of the feedback provided by your peers. Determine which feedback you believe suggests improvements that you can make to your document and make the needed revisions to your document. As this is your work, you may decide you disagree with some comments or agree with the comment but not the recommended action; you do not need to implement suggestions you disagree with.
Step 2: Return to the Memorandum Guide and Complete Missing Elements of Your Memorandum
The work you did in the pre-writing assignment did not produce the complete memorandum. That assignment was designed to get you thinking about important elements of the assignment, without having to produce the entire document. You will take what you started and have revised and with the use of the, you will complete all elements of the memorandum being careful to remember who you are writing to.
You are a line manager in Superior Car Partâ€™s Ellisville manufacturing facility. The company produces automotive parts, and you have responsibility for the line producing steel shafts for the gearbox manufactured in the Ellisville Plant. The acceptable dimension of the shaft is 2.5Â±0.05 inches in diameter with the most desirable product having a diameter of exactly 2.5 inches. The current equipment is approaching the end of its useful life and needs to be replaced. Two vendors are trying to sell your company, Superior Car Parts Incorporated, their machines for the shaft-machining task. You have been asked to assess the machines from each vendor, and to make a recommendation for a machine vendor supported by a justification for your decision.
You asked both vendors to supply data on the machining accuracy of their machines for the given task. Both vendors machined 100 shafts, collected data, plotted histograms, fitted the histograms with normal distributions and supplied you with their findings.
Let X= diameter in inches of the gearbox shaft
Abano Machines Inc.: X has a normal distribution with a mean of 2.49 and a standard deviation of 0.030
Li Equipment Corp.: X has a normal distribution with a mean of 2.53 and a standard deviation of 0.015
Audience: You are creating this document for the companyâ€™s Chief Operating Officer, (Links to an external site.) Lena George, and copying the Chief Financial Officer (Links to an external site.), Amita Kohli. Documents involved in major financial decisions like this may also be distributed by the addressees to other executives and the corporate board members.
P&S Writing Assignment 2.4 2019F
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeMemorandum header is completedThe layout and content follow Document/Memorandum header instructions in “How to Write a Business Memorandum”
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeSummary is included and completeThe Summary is included following the requirements in “How to Write a Business Memorandum” . The summary is clear, complete and consice.
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeAnalysis section is includedAn analysis section is included following the guidance in “How to Write a Business Memorandum”. The section is clear, complete and concise. (It is NOT a step-by-step presentation of the calculations.)
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeGraphics are included to support the case you are makingGraphics are included to support the case you are making
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe Additional Considerations section is includedThe additional Consideration section is included and well done.
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe Additional Considerations section is exceptionally well thought out addressing a broad range of important business considerationsFor a student completing this section exceptionally well up to 2 additional points may be given
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeConclusion is includedA conclusion is included that meets the requirements in “How to Write a Business Memorandum”. Additionally, the conclusion is clear, complete, and concise.
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeAppendix is includedAn appendix is included that presents your calculations (typewritten). The Statistical approach is and the outcome are correct.
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe assignment does not address the correct problem (minus 1 point)
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe correct audience was not addressed (minus 1 point)
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe Appendix included uses the statistical calculations using the correct approach and getting the correct answer
Total Points: 30.0
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